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上次預告了要把聯絡寫的晨詩打上來
有些詩品質一定遭到爆 因為多半是應付札記在5分鐘內寫出來的
這段應該不要打出來比較實在的 要不然被導仔看到就死定了 XD
但是 ! 其實有些都是在早上到學校FU很好的時候寫出來的
品質還可以啦 但是導仔在聯絡本看到的版本應該跟這裡的版本稍稍不同
這裡的些在打上來時 有修改一下 XD


                                           # 開電燈時 
                                                                是下一個黑夜
                                                打開了眼 切亮了夜 繞開了風箏線
                                                           依著綠色草皮飛起

                                                      風箏斷了線 亂了序

                                                手依畏著斷了夢的風箏線 在暗夜
                                                         (2008.02.21)



                                          # 著鬧鐘 摸著手
                                                 摸著鬧鐘 摸著昨夜的我
                                                          摸著鬧鐘 摸著今早睡眼惺忪的我

                                            摸著鬧鐘 摸著明天摸著
                                                                                  今晚的那雙手
                                                         (2008.02.29)



                                          # 平面上 蔚藍下的沙灘
                                                  沖去了黑夜 沖走了白晝

                                                來回擺盪著浪礫 掩飾昨晚的白晝
                                                         隨著滔滔細水
                                                           
                                                   無夜無日地載浮載沉
                                                         (2008.03.04)



                                          # 靜過頭的明煙 來吧來吧
                                                   走吧走吧

                                                就讓它 日復一日 年復一年吧

                                                         (2008.03.18)



                                          #有太多煙火的煙硝味
                                                  烽火世界下惟一的倖存

                                                  沒有太多調味料 只是少了個味
                                                         (2008.03.21)



                                          # 世的輪迴 我站在我的面前
                                                一甲年前的風光歲月 早被酸雨侵蝕殆盡

                                             我笑著愚 愚也笑著我
                                                         (2008.04.02)



                                          # 萬英呎的高空 掃描後的大地
                                                    多了些銳利

                                                       俯衝後的亂流 或許
                                                           現在還少了點血腥

                                                  垂直的氣流 壓力在烈日下劃過天際

                                                     是哀鳴  

                                                      以蕈狀刺向雲霄
                                                         (2008.04.03,07)



                                          #麼諷刺
                                                山脊上的稜線 四射艷采
                                               幾世前的群箭翳日 狼煙四起

                                                       焦炸的龍身在貴賓席上  
                                                                         
                                                                         喝采
                                                         (2008.04.21)



                                          # 冉升天  靜止的一片雲
                                                 撫去昨日雲暈  拂來片旭日東升

                                               最愛的山頭
                                                     化身為場 涓涓細流
                                                         (2008.04.23)



                                          # 破不堪 綠意掩埋了嘻鬧聲

                                                 不到平方米的牢刑
                                                       人家說  這是最有前途的

                                                     出路

                                                         (2008.04.24)



                                          # 太信這世界 

                                                人類是催化劑 生成物則是堆炭

                                                         (2008.04.29)



                                          # 了雨季才能一躍到旱季

                                                非得要四季豐腴才乾脆
                                                        梅雨的眉 是最感性的

                                                                             安眠曲
                                                         (2008.05.05)



                                          # 天  昨天的感嘆辭

                                                因此我回到明天 對於大前天
                                                      給了後天的評論

                                                         (2008.05.09)



                                          # 片雨季 槮滿屋垂
                                               散滿綠苗  散滿一個個人

                                              低下的共溫
                                                       保留了最後萬物的溫存

                                                         (2008.05.20)



                                          # 該停一停 這不是你的年齡
                                                  趕緊醒一醒 
                                                         這不是原本的妳

                                                  音樂撫慰後的性靈
                                                    如果有陣雨

                                                             你該去淋一淋

                                                         (2008.05.21)



                                          # 陽使出光芒 
                                                我不禁低頭靜靜冥想
     
                                                 頭上那片汪洋
                                                         多少希望小舟在嘗試飛翔

                                                         (2008.05.22)



                                          # 影  在朱自清筆下表現的淋漓盡致
                                                  我卻沒法子 寫我的背影

                                                   時長時短的影子
                                                       也許還能上手些
 
                                                         (2008.05.23)



                                          # 本主義的豬
                                                  拿著朴文 拿著錢
                                                      
                                              拿著名利拿著入場卷
 
                                                         (2008.05.27)



                                          # 萬英尺的逃亡
                                                 花了我閉眨不到三眼

                                             隨著氣壓蕩漾 我來到你們的地表

                                                  化成一陣一波 在重返天庭那刻
                                                         (2008.05.28)



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